Review My Site Please: ShawnsBidness

[ShawnsBidness]

This is seriously way over my head. Would someone mind taking a look at my website to see what I can do to improve it?

I'm new to web design and am trying to make some money off of affiliate links even on the eBay auctions people post.

Thanks in advance for your help.

http://www.shawnsbidness.com/

[ShawnsBidness]

  Well if I only knew how to type my own website addy that might help...

http://www.shawnsbidness.com

OK now I'm showing my true colors already. 

[The Tavern Wench]

Shawn...I started you your own thread so that more people will hopefully see it and help ya out.   

[The Bar Keep]

Well if I only knew how to type my own website addy that might help...

http://www.shawnsbidness.com

OK now I'm showing my true colors already. 

It's no problem, I just fixed your link in the original post so people won't look and see the dead link. Now I think we have ya all set ready to go in this thread.

[ShawnsBidness]

So is everyone scared to say anything? Don't be. I can handle it. 

[The Bar Keep]

So is everyone scared to say anything? Don't be. I can handle it. 

Ok, I will take a stab at it. To be perfectly honest with you I don't really see the point of a site like that. Is it meant to be a landing page? You are advertising eBay auctions for people for free and there is nothing wrong with doing that but for what reason are you doing that? The only thing you have in the way of tangible goods is only reachable through one of the links you are advertising. Have you ever considered a stand alone website that offers products (tangible goods) for sale that has nothing to do with pointing people away from your own site to eBay?

I speak from experience in sites like this as I once had a similar site that has now become a landing page for my websites where I also can advertise other peoples websites if I want to.

Now in terms of how the sites works for people who see it I would give you a rating of 5 on a scale of 1-10 due to the fact that the site loads extremely slow. There are other factors that determine the rank I gave but that is JMO.

I hope this helps and if you have any other questions feel free to PM me about them.


Joe - The Bar Keep

[Baysbeauty]

Hi ShawnsBidness,

I think you did a wonderful job and I can tell that you worked really hard at it.

I do have a question for you as this does look like a landing page.  Do you have
your own website?  I feel that a landing page would be awesome to have to
keep all of our sites together in one place, but since I'm a seller I like having my
site all by itself.  But I do like your idea on keeping everything together.